Shadows of Jewel (comic by me, pages 1-11)

Miss Lilac

Miss Lilac

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Hi everyone! I started a comic (I've finished about 8 pages)
and i wanted to know what everyone else thinks.
note: This artwork is purely my own.

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Someone could give me some ideas for touch-ups etc.
So, what do you think so far?
 
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I'm already hooked. I love the artwork and I like the story line so far. I think you did a excellent job. I love the picture where the white pony is coming to a halt and you can see the dust in the air. She looks so pretty. I can't wait to see more. I'm jumping with excitment.
 
thanks PipoK!!! You did keep your word about being the first poster!!! lol! Yep, the 2nd page is coming along, you won't have to wait too long!! (you're lucky i'm quick with art!!)
 
so far it looks similar to the one about lunarstar, but maybe that'll change as the story progresses ^^; looking good so far at least-done in MSPaint? and what's the shadow in the 2nd panel belong to?

:reaper: Kat :reaper:
 
I guess we will have to keep reading to find out what that shadow is ^_^
 
Yes, this is very similar to LunaCat's comic Worlds Apart. I hope you didn't rip from it in any way. LunaCat worked and is still working very hard on her comic that's from her fanfic 'novels'. (LunaCat, yeah that story is many novels, fantastic work on writing so much.)



~Tara
 
I'm not trying to start anything so beg my pardon for butting in. I mean no harm. Babylilac messaged me and asked me if she thought people were going to pick on her when she posted. I mean lets not jump the gun here. Until we see more of her comic pages lets not judge. I mean shes not even on page two and already someone is questioning her.

I understand lunacat is a great artist with many fans. I just now saw her comics.(gorgeous btw) But she isn't coping lunacats artwork and we really don't know the story line of the comic yet. So all I ask is before you judge lets wait and see what the story line is.

I know it seems alittle like the beginning to lunacats comic but it might end up being completely different. Not trying to start anything, just saying lets not jump the gun so to speak.
 
Thanks for the support PipoK!!! I really don't cope when people accuse others...especially when that person is ME!!! That shadow is of the side of the hill. as of yet, the line of the story has only gotten to about 3 paragraphs-nothing much.

just for anyones' interest, i didn't 'rip' anything off LunaCat's work. Her work is stunning and gorgeous. Don't know if anyone's noticed, but my style is nothing to do with LunaCats. I studied the style and approved myself that it didn't look like her work at all-that's how much of a perfectionist i am. Another thing, my story also has nothing to do with the Pony Tales series.--thank you so much again for your support PipoK.
 
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C'mon now guys. Don't be so quick to accuse others of stealing just because something might be similar. It doesn't necessarily mean anybody's ripped off anything. It's too early in the story anyway to see what's going on exactly.

That being said...nice work BabyLilac! Keep it up!
 
Ok. This is the second page. Please don't accuse the story-line. Like i said, it's purely original and if anyone can find a resemblence it's purely coincidental.

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The storyline of this page is that the escaping pony is a slave belonging to an evil worlord and his warriors are trying to bring her back but she is currently escaping successfully. She carries a bag - what is in it i wonder??
 
Ahahaha...i'll see what i can do LLB!!! She might end up somewhere lol...
 
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