Need something redlined? Post it here!

[Mimic]

What is a redline?
A redline drawing is a sketch that points out errors/give corrections in an existing drawing. The sketch is usually red, hence the term.

I'm offering a (free!) redlining service to anyone who is struggling with the proportion(s) of their drawing, or is having trouble drawing a specific part. These redlines are references, and I would appreciate it if you wouldn't trace over them. Tracing defeats the whole purpose of learning to develop your own style.

Criticism vs. critique
Many people, artists and non-artists alike, tend to become confused over the definitions of these two terms.

• To criticize is to "the expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes," per Google.
• To critique is to point out perceived flaws, mistakes, or errors, while offering advice on how to fix them. It is not done in malice, but with the intention to help the artist(s) improve.
I'm doing the latter.

Important note:
This isn't just limited to ponies! I can redline just about any animal, and to an extent humans.

Please remember that I, surprisingly, have a life outside of ponies and may not be able to complete your redlines immediately. Nonetheless, please don't let that discourage you from posting, I'll get to them in time.

 

[starbeam]

I have been meaning to ask that for a couple of days, yay for a thread!
If you don't mind, I have a messed up Cancing Butterflies and I think I messed her up. Lemme post her

I also have a Bluebelle, but the lines are really faint, here she is

Tell me if you can possibly spot any other mistakes, I know no one is flawless in this world, and I'm not an exception
http://www.mlptp.net/index.php?gallery/albums/my-pony-art.3705/

 

[Mimic]

Neither am I! I don't expect my drawings to be perfect, but I'm hoping that they can at least help others improve. I'll get to yours as soon as possible.

Edit:
I lightened, cropped, and rotated these so that they were easier to see and work with. Hope you don't mind!

A major problem I see here is that her right hind leg bends at a point where it shouldn't - there is no joint there. If you want that hoof bent, it should bend lower down, near the ankle.

You have a very cute and defined style! However, I did notice in almost all of your drawings two problems:
- They lack a gap between the "knee" joint and the rump, as outlined in the Bluebelle image. Contrary to my notes, this applies even when the leg is lifted - not just when standing!
- Secondly, their stomachs should curve upwards as it reaches their waists.

Keep on drawing, you're doing great. ♥

 

[starbeam]

Oh My Gosh, this is what I needed! Thank you so much, I know why Quacker's gave Bluebelle and Dancing Butterflies weird looks now....